Saturday, July 16, 2011

haiku retrospective clxxiv

I seem to be in a period of cautious, tight linkage, just-so shasei (sketches from life). The juxtapositions don't hop very far, the relationships between the two parts are too obvious, and the twist might be too obviously staged.

Oh well, having said that, they still give me a brief smile.

november rain
a rainbow of peppers
in the produce section

10 November 2001

winter birkenstocks
the wool toe of her sock
skims a puddle

10 November 2001

weekend traffic
the "Road Work Ahead" sign
turned sideways

10 November 2001

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